![]() ![]() I found it oddly distracting that this author kept using the word "thickening" to describe our heroes' "bits" when after a lot of heavy petting and mouth play they should already be thick enough. ![]() I would have loved to see some more intimate interaction between these two that wasn't of the sexual variety. ![]() There is hot sex (really long, drawn-out sex), but little else to their relationship. Our heroes' love story fell rather flat for me. I get that they were going on different assignments, but I feel like if they had a "faction" or a specific group of terrorists against which they carried out their battles, it would feel more cohesive. There doesn't seem to be one main goal throughout the narrative. There seemed to be the general notion of our heroes battling against bio terrorists, but in each battle, they take out a different set of "bad guys". I like the idea of splice and metahumans I was merely surprised that there were so many of them, considering the genetic mutation is so rare.Īs for the story's overall plot, I found it a bit scattered. From the view of a SFF novel, this idea was intriguing. ![]()
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